Writing- Recount Week 6

This is my writing of my Christmas we got to choose birthday or Christmas, I chose Christmas because I had a pretty exiting Christmas. 

What write a recount about Christmas or your birthday.

So what writing 

Now what add more information about what happened and recraft it.

This is my work in progress, I still need to recraft it more.

Recrafted writing

This is my recrafted writing about eating a lemon

What writing a recount

So writing 

Now what to add more ifmation about the story

Srl writing

What write a paragraph about a character 

So what creative writing 

Now what add more detail about the character