Wednesday, August 19, 2015

Recrafted writing

This is my recrafted writing about eating a lemon

What writing a recount

So writing 

Now what to add more ifmation about the story
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1 comment:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 2, 2015 at 3:59 PM

    hi daniel I really like your description because you used very good words to describe the lemon and how you felt about eating it. your next step is to add more describing words

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